tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9404072.post111594992540564546..comments2023-04-11T07:49:48.611-07:00Comments on Daruma Pilgrims in Japan: Kumarajiva, the TranslatorGabi Grevehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16362456518166174106noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9404072.post-1144896041932481722006-04-12T19:40:00.000-07:002006-04-12T19:40:00.000-07:00tomoshibi omireba kaze ariyoru no yukiin the flame...<B>tomoshibi o<BR/>mireba kaze ari<BR/>yoru no yuki<BR/><BR/>in the flame of my lamp<BR/>i see just a hint of wind<BR/>on a night of snow </B><BR/><BR/>Oshima Ryota<BR/><BR/>Read a discussion about the translation of this haiku.<BR/><A HREF="http://happyhaiku.blogspot.com/2000/07/translating-haiku.html" REL="nofollow">. Translating Haiku, by Gabi Greve . </A> <BR/><BR/>::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::Gabi Grevehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16362456518166174106noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9404072.post-1134695575901574222005-12-15T17:12:00.000-08:002005-12-15T17:12:00.000-08:00kareeda | ni | karasu | no | tomarikeri | aki | no...<B><BR/>kareeda | ni | karasu | no | tomarikeri | aki | no | kure </B><BR/><BR/>Read a discussion about translating this haiku<BR/><BR/><A HREF="http://groups.yahoo.com/group/Haiku-Essays/message/122" REL="nofollow"> a crow on a bare branch ... or else ... </A> <BR/><BR/>::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::Gabi Grevehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16362456518166174106noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9404072.post-1134694648535953922005-12-15T16:57:00.000-08:002005-12-15T16:57:00.000-08:00the water of sound - mizu no oto Example for a WRO...<B> the water of sound - mizu no oto </B><BR/><BR/>Example for a <B>WRONG </B>translation.<BR/><BR/><A HREF="http://groups.yahoo.com/group/happyhaiku/message/2402" REL="nofollow"> Read about it here. </A> <BR/><BR/>Gabi<BR/>::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::Gabi Grevehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16362456518166174106noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9404072.post-1116028356672871692005-05-13T16:52:00.000-07:002005-05-13T16:52:00.000-07:00Dear gabi sanYou open many doors... a pleasant bre...Dear gabi san<BR/><BR/>You open many doors... a pleasant breeze.<BR/><BR/>bow<BR/><BR/>ai... chibi<BR/>............................<BR/>From the Daruma Forum.<BR/><BR/>Thank you Chibi san !<BR/>GabiGabi Grevehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16362456518166174106noreply@blogger.com